Tuesday, September 01, 2009

The Little Doll




There was once a little doll,
with looks so cozy.
She had a cuddly crawl,
and cheeks so rosy.

She was my little doll,
my whole life's worth.
Such was my little doll,
my whole new birth.

I was her tune,
and she was my dance.
We lived a boon,
loving the trance.

Now,I live my life,
and she loves hers.
Lost was the life,
which used to be ours.

There was a little doll,
and my memory ain't lousy.
Now there's a subtle wall,
and my dream's so drowsy.

Well!In your well-known world,
a little doll cried.
But,in my unknown world,
a little doll died.

P.S 1: This is a poetic response to the yesteryear blockbuster The Little Doll and the goldwinner The Little Doll.

P.S 2: All characters in the poem are purely fictional. Any resemblance to any person or a doll, living or otherwise, is purely kakataliyam a k a coincidental. This is for a creative writing assignment which was supposed to a) Start with "There was once a little doll" and b) End with "A little doll cried. A little doll died"

15 comments:

RoCkErS said...

nice mama

MyTh said...

coolio, i never seem to understand rhymes, but its a talent nonetheless

and thanks for linking my blog :D

arupendu said...

Aggu nice poem!

Kharageous said...

keka la unnav..

Vikram Rathi said...

good one...but I don't know whether I got right meaning out of it. U see that's the main problem with verses, lots of interpretations.
keep it up!!

karun said...

frankie was right..
poem was ossum
i dunno 4-5 reads down the line, but the first made me sit up and take not of stanza 2.
P.S. normally manipulative,rhymes in this dint seem so. \m/

sidzoo said...

Stud ra maama!

the full blood prince said...

good work again.. although you've set higher standards for yourself with your previous works!

mandrake said...

nice work dude.. i like the disclaimer best.. :).. and the last 2 lines ..

venkat said...

racha mama...

s15dreamweaver said...

kakataliyam aa tokka ! malli 'my'...'hers' enti ra? :P

aditya pappula said...

aggu is back fellas... n so is the musical :D

der Doppelgänger said...

never knew of your "doll"...
hope its inanimate...cuz its highly subjective elsewise
:P

waise nicey poem...

Sid said...

Nice man...it seems to have come straight from the heart...

Nihar Panigrahi said...

Loved the P.S. 2! :D

P.S. Liked the poem too! :)